Generations

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• in the very first paragraph, you refer to chuck as she Totally unacceptable
• damn, this is great
• cool idea. can you make it longer?
• good!
• grat idea, but yes I agree could be longer
• longer, please. as to the gender thing, the Dom/me is referred to as He at one point, though i chose female.
• Very cool, just needs some adjusting but the possibilities are endless!
• Needs further development.
• great! I got an hard on reading the story!
• mark gasped as the large dildo/buttplug finally went all the way into his cock, don't want the dildo in there :D but a great story it is
• errrr - my sub turned in2 a girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
• Cool!!
• just getting started?
• Could be longer with a few more options, but is a GREAT IDEA
• gangbang included and cum on face
• butt plug should have HUGE
• it's great - a story about me and the one i would so like to be dominated by! PLEASE make more!
• Could be longer ?? Size does not always matter;-) Gr8! work thank you for adding it to the site.
• beastiality
• self-bondage
• i'm amanda and i havea slave named max : )
• Wonderful!
• we i like it
• include rubber bondage
• bestiality
• very nice. thank you
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• *groan* That is spot on!
• what wonderful story
• good
• I think it was silly. The main word "mummification" never came up in the pre-written story.
• i like these type of stories where you can put whatever names you want into it.